Wednesday, November 2, 2011

An Ode To A Stranger



We lived as sweet friends,
We talked as close friends,

We moved as best friends,

We left as strangers!!!


I regret that moment,

I walked away from you!
I want to go back again,

I wish you knew me!

Waiting for a glimpse,

Waiting for a word,

Waiting for a pat,

Waiting for a smile...

40 comments:

  1. Good one Roops. Short, simple and yet very painful.

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  2. Yeah...It is indeed painful...
    Thanks Leo...

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  3. Thanks Geetha...
    In between, your blog is also awesome...
    Keep writing!

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  4. Thanks Muhammedkunji...
    Encouragement and prayers of my readers help me to improve...

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  5. It is always difficult to describe simple things. Try describing friendship or Love; you can write page and epics, but still we are asking same questions. Wht is love and friendship.

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  6. Exactly Prajith Aman...Those two are tough to describe!
    Thanks TheBluntBlogger...

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  7. Wow, so sweet & very painful, thanks for good sharing.

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  8. "We left as strangers" almost every close friendship has that unanswered question, why? Something similar happened to me some time back, though I know lost past cannot relive again, still I wait, like you ... *hugs* :)

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  9. That was really a touching remark...Once your best friend leave you, it is like the whole world is empty.Thanks a lot dear for your hug too...I'll also wait for your friend to be back to bring a smile on your face...

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  10. Shortest of your poems that I've read, but the impact has been the greatest. Shows how a few apt words can tell a story better!!!
    Like this a lot...

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  11. I love writing short and simple...Thank you Nishdathi

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  12. Hai,

    Again a nice writing from u... thanks. well written.... true feelings....

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  13. Cute poem roopz..thank you for stopping by and for your wishes.

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  14. Its not you Das...
    Anyway thanks for posting a comment after a very long time...

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  15. lovely poem...! :)
    Here's a shot film I saw on YouTube that is almost on the same lines as your beautiful poem..take a look : http://youtu.be/tSdELZxEnHY
    =)

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  16. Thanks for the video n comment Aman :)

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  17. awesome line and u are IDIOT!!!

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  18. Thank you...That was too little of what I'd expected from you :)

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  19. Thanks for your comment Prosenjeet :)

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  20. story of my life :) nice one Roopakutty.

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  21. And may the wait end soon..
    Good one :)

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  22. sneham manasinte vingallaanu..sauhrudam athu maaykunna marunum...!!!

    charlessebz...

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    1. Best definition of friendship :)

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  23. This is truly genious! Continue to pen lovely words.

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