Friday, September 30, 2011

Pale Body And Wandering Mind


I dumped my emotions,
Deep inside.
I smiled at everyone,
From my heart...

My dreams wandered
Without limits.
My thoughts hovered
Without any concern...

My body begged:
Stop thinking too much.
My heart shouted:
Thoughts keep me going.

Veins dried up,
Making me pale...
My eyes say don't sleep
My stomach says don't eat.

Half-alive I lay,
Without hunger and sleep.
Mind still roams,
In a world I always dreamed

23 comments:

  1. one of ur best poem i have read ^_^

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  2. Thanks meenz...
    May be because its true from my heart and not written for namesake, it came up well...

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  3. Thank you...
    Yeah! I really smiled at everyone from my heart :)

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  4. Nice blog...
    very nice poem, simply great..

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  5. Thanks Swetha...
    Thank you very much...

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  6. Veins dried up?!! It's your blood that flows through my veins and encircling my heart. It’s your blood!!! It’s your blood!!!

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  7. I didn't get the exact idea what you meant...It will be nice if you could explain it...

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  8. A good poem indeed and your blog's layout is also very nice.

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  9. A few dreams yet to be fulfilled...
    Mind is wandering on that making my body pale...Simple!!!

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  10. nice poem
    A little sad
    I m not into poetry that much so couldn't fully understand what you wanted to convey

    -Black and White Sketches

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  11. Interesting... But then again, mind and heart roaming in dreams even when the gut feeling is not to do so, that's quite normal isn't it? :) Liked it!

    Leo @ I Rhyme Without Reason

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  12. Yes Leo...Its always like that...
    Thanks bwsketches...

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  13. Beautiful lines! So practical. :)

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